The Marean noblewoman Lanyrene ax Trastasia sets out on a voyage to discover riches for the glory of the Empire and, more importantly, for her own sake. Instead, she and her crew discover a strange tribe of natives. What do they want, and do they indeed possess the gold and luxuries Lanyrene seeks?
Comments of all kinds are more than welcome
Potential SPOILER:
The story ends on a sort of cliffhanger. It doesn't mean the story will continue or end there (haven't planned that far ahead!), but can be considered an open ending for now.
I'll be damned twice. It happens the best part was missing when i read this chapter for the first time (on your blog) No wonder i did not understand what was going on in part II
Very subtle, and even more appreciable because of that ! Your narrative style is really cool and the three main characters, interesting. Though Lanyrene looks like a cliché of a "i have a pen in my ass and anyway i do not talk to you peon" noble bitch in this chapter she becomes far more intersting once her devouring ambition is revealed i think
Silly me! I didn't think to post the rest of this part when I decided I would put the whole thing on DeviantArt soon anyway. It's a good thing you figured it out!
It's great that you like my writig style, because I have the feeling it's just too weird for most people Also, I can see your point about Lanyrene's "character development". There's an in-story reason for it as well as a "literary" one: I try to dig deeper into the characters as the story progresses, presenting more and more layers to the reader so he/she isn't overwhelmed.
Haha sure I can't seriously talk about your writting style for obvious reasons but it's pleasant to read you, because i think you tend to write an "european way", less direct and more twisted than the american style for novels. I don't know if i'm very understandable here but nevermind, i liked the whole thing that's all i can tell
That's cool, because I enjoy writing in a slightly "convoluted" fashion. I think I need to be less brief in my descriptions, though. Although with shorter descriptions people can make up their own mind about how the people and places look...
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Very subtle, and even more appreciable because of that ! Your narrative style is really cool and the three main characters, interesting. Though Lanyrene looks like a cliché of a "i have a pen in my ass and anyway i do not talk to you peon" noble bitch in this chapter
It's great that you like my writig style, because I have the feeling it's just too weird for most people
I can't seriously talk about your writting style for obvious reasons
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